Assignment #4- Revisions

My final paper look very differently from my first rough draft, as after peer review i completely cdhanged my mind and change my topic. actually topic are almost the same it's about how  to write, but  the main idea  and  concepts are different. I think in my final paper i had written more emotionally and expressed more feeling than in my rough draft. Yes i did big major revisions to the contact  as when i was reading my rough draft i was  understanding that is not interesting no one will interested about this story, than i decide to revise everything. for final i mostly focus on feeling and worries that i  had while writing my paper for my first research and long paper that i had last semester. in my first paper i didn't even know what i;m going to write and i just choose a topic that i always had straggle with. after i had done it, and i had reading it it's doesn't seem good to as a writer and i had to change my topic. The guide to to make my revisions was three literary readings from black board. Before i started my first draft, after i read this readings i was thinking what topic and situation from my period of life i choose for a interesting topic. this readings make to hardly think that the topic and story should really  interested the readers, your audiences. The strongest aspect is might be my final body paragraph, as finally did my fork, and good grade for my first research paper.